Casey+B

March 19th
About The Research Paper I did strong in the content and the body, I included enough information. I explained the life of Sylvia well. My title was creative, and my conclusion was okay. I need to improve in many ways. I would like to better include infromation from my researchers. Also I need to work on my grammer and punctation. I need some improvement in my formatting of the citations I used. I area where I and going to have to work hard is the sentence structure. I had many errors of that in my research paper. Over all I do feel pretty good about my research paper I put a lot of time and effort into it. I was a knew experience. It is a great way to learn, and i'm ready to try it again with farneheit 451 soon!

About my author
My author is Sylvia Plath. She wrote the Bell Jar. It amazes me that she wrote over 274 poems, in her sort life time. Plath was only thirty years old when she killed herself. Plath had a rough life but I dont think she should have killed herself. She was a great writer. She brought out ideas that, many brave authors would never dare to do. Like some of the things that happened to her. Things that happened at the hospital, the test therapies they did. Those were horrific and should never be done to anyone.

I found this research method to be very good so far. I guess I still dont really understand the point in the annotated bibliograpy. The notecards though are a great thing, they are going to help in greatly in writing my paper. I wish we would have learned this method earlier. At least before this school year, it would have helped me a ton in my psychology class. I like that you are connecting to us that you are using the same research method and you are in college right now. I know that this well help me and I think I've been learning it better because I know that I will need to use it again.

Finishing the Bell Jar by Sylvia Plath
Characters: Summary: The book "The Bell Jar is about a young women, that is not pleased with her life. She loves writing and gets a trip to New York, expenses paid and everything. Well there she meets a friend named Doreen. She has to go back to her home and is upset by that. The man that wants to marry her, she doesn't want to marry. She goes to many a consulor and after she decides to go and try shock therapy. She goes to the hospital after trying to kill herself. Still having problems the poor girl is upset.
 * 2/15/12 **
 * Esther is the main character, she is the one narrating the story. As your reading the book you see everything though her eyes.**

= **"The Blurry Vision" Form The Bell Jar By Sylvia Plath** = =Feb. 7th, 2012= Slowly she has became more and more upset by many things and is to a breaking point.People really started noticing like her mom and Doreen. She hasnt showered in 3 weeks or even changed her clothes, she hadn't slept in seven nights. She is starting to believe there is not point in that type of thing, it was silly. She was waiting to meet with doctor gordon a [|psychiatrist]. Her mother had set this up. When first seeing him she thought he was almost pretty. Page 107

= = = = ="These days in New York" From The Bell Jar by Sylvia Plath= = = = = ="Seeing Out Of The glass" The Bell Jar by= =Sylvia Plath~1/20/12= My main character [|Sylvia Plath] is a nice young woman. She isn't very sure of her self though, something is wrong with her. She can't find a way to truly feel and express her emotions. Her close friend Doreen seemed very nice. Sylvia was staying in a very nice place, with so many other girls, and only girls. There were models, and girls from all over that were being protected for all the bad men in the world, they were being shethered until the girls were older enough and ready to go out into the world. She was motivated by wanting to get out of the city and also getting to get somewhere because she was different. Her motivation was strong enough that she wrote many papers, to get into the writing chance. Morally she doesn't very well know what she wants, and hasn't said much about he morals. Sylvia does think that some people get to much for nothing.

="The Start to A Tough Time", The Bell Jar by Sylvia Plath=

My novel is "The Bell Jar", by Sylvia Plath. It is about a young girl who makes it into a New York trip, for fashion. She has been feeling trapped at times. She is acting strange because, she feels like she express emotion. Also a new friend has came into the picture Doreen. I feel like this book is going to be very good. I also know that this girl is upset about a lot of things, has some problems, and she needs help.